I have a sentence structured as follows in a scientific text.
But, in particular, when doing A, the system cannot do B.
I think all commas are formally required. However, for "But" in particular, I am always urged to omit the trailing comma, since doing a reading pause feels really awkward. The same holds for "But in particular" and to some extent for "But in particular when".
Question: Is there any rule that would allow omitting one of the two commas in the first part of the given sentence in a scientific text?
Edit: Here is an alternative summary of text, incl. the sentence before the "But".
The previous solution avoids to make any assumptions on effect X. But, in particular, when doing A for objects Y1 and Y2, this may cause effect B.
Based on the discussion, I now rewrote this as follows.
The previous solution avoids to make any assumptions on effect X. This may cause effect B, in particular when doing A for objects Y1 and Y2.
I did not move the "in particular" to the end of the sentence, to better emphasize the whole when clause, rather than only the "objects Y1 and Y2".