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I'am thinking a motto of a technology startup. I'm wondering which one is better:

NAME empowers smartphone users with leading machine learning technologies and solutions.

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NAME empowers smartphone users by leading machine learning technologies and solutions.

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NAME powers up smartphone users with leading machine learning technologies and solutions.

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NAME brings leading machine learning technologies and solutions to smartphone users.

I prefer empower than provide and allow, because it feels like giving power to someone, am I correct?

Does anyone have a good idea for the motto?

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  • I am voting to close, because this could be the new poster question for opinion based questions.
    – Helmar
    Commented Aug 15, 2016 at 10:14

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Not sure if this is the best place to ask this but okay...

Going based off your examples I'd use with becuase by sounds wrong (at least to my ear, it doesn't sound right) and doesn't create a connection with your product. With sounds symbiotic while by sounds causal.

Empowers is a better verb becuase it also creates a better relationship than just powers.

After your edit, brings could work if you are a provider in something like a service rather than a product, but again this creates something that seems like a causal relationship than a symbiotic one which can make people feel better.

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