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I'm writing down few notes about a technical argument, I'm doing it also to understand them better, so in my intro I'm saying:

If you are reading this, I hope it will be useful for you like writing it was for me.

Mostrly my doubts are about the second part of the sentence:

like writing it was for me

Does it sound correct in English? There is a more correct way to express this thought?

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  • It doesn't sound too off to me. Maybe include a comma: "...useful for you, like writing it was for me."
    – Tushar Raj
    Commented Jun 9, 2015 at 8:24

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I would probably say "I hope that reading this will be as useful for you as writing it was for me."

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  • Yeah, having an 'if' in there sounds weird since it is obviously the case. Saying "if" when assuming a positive response is not uncommon in other languages, but it sounds off in English. For reasons I can't articulate, this sentence definitely requires an 'as' comparison instead of a 'like' comparison.
    – Jason Bray
    Commented Jan 5, 2016 at 14:24
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I don't think many people would quibble about the grammaticality of the slight rewrite

If you are reading this, I hope it will be useful for you, as writing it was for me.

This usage note from Collins English Dictionary seems to license the version with 'like':

It was [once] thought that as rather than like should be used to mean 'in the same way that', but now both as and like are acceptable: they hunt and catch fish as/like their ancestors used to.

The difference is that in the Collins example, the reading may well be that the methods rather than the hunting / fishing societies are being said to be comparable. Perhaps in OP's example 'like' is being stretched a little too far for some people.

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  • Sorry for pinging you here - don't know how else to do it! Are you going to sign-on to Linguistics Beta, where your Grice/Sperber & Wilson post is living so that people can message you? Commented Jun 8, 2015 at 17:02
  • Thanks for your answer @Edwin, as non-native English speaker I'm always worried that my sentences sound too "exotic". Beside the 'like/as', do you think my sentence sounds right?
    – mucio
    Commented Jun 8, 2015 at 17:03
  • Perhaps I'd try to choose a way of saying it that didn't emphasise the mechanics of writing when you mean the whole process. If you are reading this, I hope it will be as useful for you as crystallising my thoughts in writing was for me. Commented Jun 8, 2015 at 18:48
  • en.wikipedia.org/wiki/…
    – Barmar
    Commented Jun 9, 2015 at 19:33

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