I'm writing a math paper, so it would probably be easier to answer this question with some background in math. Assume I have a set of "things" and some function turning these things into numbers. I'm interested in two values: the maximum value of this function and the "thing" the maximum is attained on/at. What's the right choice of preposition here? If there are multiple "things" with the same value, do I say "things the maximum is attained on/at" with the same preposition or change it somehow? Also, is this phrase "the thing the maximum is attained on/at" good enough or maybe I'd rather say "the thing on/at which the maximum is attained"?
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The choice of preposition is largely dependent on your said mathematical "things":
- The function f attains its maximum value at the point x=0.
- The function f attains its maximum value on the interval [0,1].
- The function f attains its maximum value in the subset M.
Alternatively, one may write
- x=0 is the point at which the maximum value of the function f is attained.
- [0,1] is the interval on which the maximum value of the function f is attained.
- M is the subset in which the maximum value of the function f is attained.
Though, in mathematical writing, one usually shuns beginning a sentence or phrase with a mathematical symbol. Hence
- The point x=0 is the point at which the maximum value of the function f is attained.
is always preferred in mathematical writing. See How to Write Mathematics by Halmos.
If the last formulation sounds repetitive, go with the first set of phrasings.
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So, you say phrase "the point the maximum is attained at" is not a good idea? Commented Oct 16, 2014 at 8:57
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To attain at: simply because it's an ending point. A point at which you arrive (or try to arrive). Using on makes it sound like a starting point, rather than a maximum (or minimum, both are extremes).
When comparing all of the results, I'd still go for at: the "thing" at which the highest value was attained was X. There's no reason why the adverb should change here.