I have to change a description for something in our app, and I was given this sentence:
Create, edit and delete camera assignments and camera and DVR settings.
Now the lack of an Oxford comma is obviously going to need to be updated, but I'm having some trouble with the subject of the sentence.
camera assignments is one subject, but
camera and DVR settings seems to be another, compounded from
camera settings and
So far my fix for it would be:
Create, edit, and delete camera assignments, camera settings, and DVR settings.
Is this sentence grammatically correct? It still seems like a repetitive mouthful. Could something be done with
camera assignments and
camera settings (both being a property of a
camera) to compound this more neatly?