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I'm writing an essay for an English subject about the film The Shawshank Redemption.

I've used the sentence

But though the Warden presides over many prisoners, he is morally no sounder and stands less chance of reform.

My teacher has corrected no sounder to no more sound, but Microsoft Word identifies the latter phrase as grammatically faulty. No more sound does sound odd when isolated, but I can't put my finger on why specifically.

There are mixed opinions online, to the point that citing them here would do little good.

What are your thoughts?

  • I was so tempted to make the question Or are both equally sound? – Mad Banners Aug 30 '16 at 9:30
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    'Sounder' is an unusual word, and may be other than the comparative adjective. Even a group of wild pigs. For once, I think the choice of a periphrastic comparative for a monosyllabic adjective is quite justified (though it would be pedantic to label either choice incorrect). – Edwin Ashworth Aug 30 '16 at 9:35
  • Off Topic, but what about rephrasing? "..he is [just] as immoral, and stands less chance..." – user193059 Aug 30 '16 at 9:40
  • I think you could have a general rule here that if the adjective in question (sound) also has a verb form with a totally different meaning (which sound does), then you should avoid this construction, as some people will read it as "verb-er" - someone who makes a sound, in this case. – Max Williams Aug 30 '16 at 9:41
  • But though is a bit weird too. However, there is justification for it in Shakespeare. – Mad Banners Aug 30 '16 at 10:37
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The evidence below strongly suggests that sounder is a valid comparative form of the adjective, sound.

  • “Unhappy being,” said the Abbot, “who hast no better subject of pleasantry than that which should make thee tremble — no sounder jest than thine own sins, and no better objects for laughter than those who can absolve thee from the guilt of ...
    Sir Walter Scott, The Abbot, 1820

  • We are willing that religion should be judged by its fruits ; there is no sounder principle than that ; but be sure to judge it by its fruits; do not judge it by anything else.
    The Nazarene, 1843

  • This argument is obviously no sounder than the following: ‘How can language describe the world?’—‘Because the world is language-like—it is linguistic’, and no sounder than: 'How can the English language describe the world?—‘Because the world is intrinsically British.’
    Karl Popper, Conjectures and Refutations: The Growth of Scientific Knowledge, 1963

  • There is no sounder investment than property. Land. You all know that a dollar won't buy what it used to buy. A dollar might not be worth but fifty cents a year from now.
    Cormac McCarthy, Child of God, 1973

And if we examine the noun phrase, sounder morals, Google Books yields over 240 instances of this usage.

  • but it is refreshing to see people young and old alike can have a hero in this day and age with a sound work ethic and even sounder morals.

  • Lincoln was not only more available than Seward, but he had sounder morals and better judgment than Seward, or any of the others. He was far better equipped ...

  • The English romances have traditionally been said to embody sounder morals' because they drastically changed French concepts of love, sex and marriage and were 'less lascivious'.

  • ... under our Universities imparting Higher Education and training leaders, teachers, and professionals who would dedicate their services in the cause of better education, sounder morals, nobler manners, sweeter life and happier surroundings ...

  • Excellent research. All of those adjective examples could be written more clearly though, I think, as "No jest more sound than...", "No principle more sound than...", "is obviously no more sound than the following...", etc. I don't think the noun phrase examples could be similarly rewritten. – Max Williams Aug 30 '16 at 11:25

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