Example:
The wind and the owls weren't the/my only [...] that night.
I didn't using fear as a noun is a bit weird in this situation? What's a better alternative?
Example:
The wind and the owls weren't the/my only [...] that night.
I didn't using fear as a noun is a bit weird in this situation? What's a better alternative?
Using fear as a noun like this is perfectly acceptable. Most of the alternatives being suggested feel awkward in comparison. "My worst fear" and "my only fear" are common sentence fragments; google searches for them return 367k and 305k results respectively. Most tellingly) "the fear of" returns a whopping 47 million results.
You've already got the correct word - use it!
Fright may fit your context:
- Sudden intense fear, as of something immediately threatening
I didn't using fear as a noun is a bit weird in this situation? What's a better alternative?
--> He is clearly asking a better alternative.
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Jan 27, 2015 at 12:36
One option is Terror
- Informal. a person or thing that is especially annoying or unpleasant.
Even more so in British usage:
- A person or thing that inspires great dread
This fits pretty well into your sentence:
The wind and the owls weren't the only terror that night.
How about :
The wind and the owls weren't the only fearsome things that night.
There are two words I can come up with:
scary — something that makes you scared, with fear
frightening — something that causes you fear
As I brought up in a comment to another answer, you may reword your sentence to:
The wind and the owls weren't the only frightening/scary things that night.
You could use Bogeyman/men. Whilst this has the literal meaning ascribed in the link, I believe it can also be used to refer to a more general fear, perhaps commonly "of the night".
The wind and the owls weren't the only bogeymen that night.
Something that causes fear is frightening.
It works in your context, too:
The wind and the owls were not the only frightening things [that]/[in the] night.
A more formal word for fear (as a noun) is a phobia
The wind and the owls weren't my only phobias that night.
Something a little less extreme might be worry or concern
The wind and the owls weren't my only worries that night.
The wind and the owls weren't my only concerns that night.
Honestly, I don't thing using the word fear here would be that odd at all. Of course, that depends on whether or not you have just recently used in (i.e., in the previous sentence).
a great word for something that causes fear is a "menace."
it works here, too, depending on the tone of what you're writing:
The wind and the owls were not the only menaces in that night.
The wind and the owls weren't the/my only unease that night.
The wind and the owls were not the only apprehensions that night.
The wind and owls were not all I dread that night.
A few words that might ring a bell-
If the fear gave an almost pleasurable sensation of fright/a sudden numbing, you can use:
To indicate a fearful expectation or anticipation:
If the fear resulted from the awareness of danger, you may use:
Reference- TFD