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Usage of our"our" in sentences where we skip that/which are

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on our smartphones more powerful than your computer.

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on our smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is this sentence correct? It sounds much better if we remove the ourour before smartphonessmartphones but since:

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on big smartphones more powerful than your computer.

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on big smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is correct why should the original be wrong?

If it is wrong, what is it about OURour that makes it wrong?

Usage of our in sentences where we skip that/which are

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on our smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is this sentence correct? It sounds much better if we remove the our before smartphones but since:

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on big smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is correct why should the original be wrong?

If it is wrong, what is it about OUR that makes it wrong?

Usage of "our" in sentences where we skip that/which are

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on our smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is this sentence correct? It sounds much better if we remove the our before smartphones but since:

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on big smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is correct why should the original be wrong?

If it is wrong, what is it about our that makes it wrong?

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Usage of our in sentences where we skip that/which are

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on our smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is this sentence correct? It sounds much better if we remove the our before smartphones but since:

We check our Facebook three times on the way to work on big smartphones more powerful than your computer.

Is correct why should the original be wrong?

If it is wrong, what is it about OUR that makes it wrong?