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We are working on an methodology, allowing to detect disparities between the regions and within/inside the regions. For example:

  • There is a two-fold difference in salary between region A and B - this is a between region disparity.

  • Only 2% of residents receive a median salary in region C and 70% in region D - this is a within/inside region disparity.

Does the following sentence, using words between and within carry the same message:

Novel methodology for identifying between and within region disparities in income

Or should I use other words?

We are working on an methodology, allowing to detect disparities between the regions and within/inside the regions. For example:

  • There is a two-fold difference in salary between region A and B - this is a between region disparity.

  • Only 2% of residents receive a median salary in region D - this is a within/inside region disparity.

Does the following sentence, using words between and within carry the same message:

Novel methodology for identifying between and within region disparities in income

Or should I use other words?

We are working on an methodology, allowing to detect disparities between the regions and within/inside the regions. For example:

  • There is a two-fold difference in salary between region A and B - this is a between region disparity.

  • Only 2% of residents receive a median salary in region C and 70% in region D - this is a within/inside region disparity.

Does the following sentence, using words between and within carry the same message:

Novel methodology for identifying between and within region disparities in income

Or should I use other words?

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Choosing prepositions for writing between and within region disparities

We are working on an methodology, allowing to detect disparities between the regions and within/inside the regions. For example:

  • There is a two-fold difference in salary between region A and B - this is a between region disparity.

  • Only 2% of residents receive a median salary in region D - this is a within/inside region disparity.

Does the following sentence, using words between and within carry the same message:

Novel methodology for identifying between and within region disparities in income

Or should I use other words?