I'm trying to write a cover letter for a fairly prestigious job, and I'm aiming for (arguably too much) perfection in my cover letter. I don't want to be turned away only because the hiring people though I was too careless with my punctuation and capitalization.
My sentence goes as follows:
I hope to one day go on to complete a Masters degree in Computer Science with a focus in Applied Cryptography.
I've never been great with the technical rules of the English language, despite being a native speaker.