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If a sentence ends with a question offset by an em-dash does it end with a period or a question mark? This is the example:

Lucy scans for forgotten manglow mentions, but the margin notes contain only her data for resolving Mangifera humboldtensis’ central question— how did a subtropical angiosperm survive cold damp Humboldt County?

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  • I would be tempted to use something like ... "central question: How did a subtropical angiosperm survive cold damp Humboldt County?"
    – Hot Licks
    Commented Jun 2, 2023 at 22:28
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    With that phrasing, I would include the question mark. If you feel awkward about the question mark, you could rephrase it so that one isn't needed: "… central question — how a subtropical angiosperm survived cold damp Humboldt County."
    – ralph.m
    Commented Jun 2, 2023 at 22:57
  • And sort that spacing around the dash.
    – Stuart F
    Commented Jun 2, 2023 at 23:16
  • @ralph.m thanks! That solution really works for me. Thanks Stuart F for callout on spacing! Commented Jun 2, 2023 at 23:33

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The direct question at the end of the sentence licenses a question mark. Even if you thought that the first part of the sentence (a statement) justified a period at the end, the question mark would override it. The Chicago Manual of Style says:

When more than one mark of punctuation (excepting quotation marks, parentheses, brackets, and sometimes dashes) is called for at one location in a sentence, only the stronger or more necessary mark is retained. (CMOS 14th ed., section 5.135)

It then gives two examples, the second of them demonstrating that "the period . . . is omitted in deference to the question mark". This suggests that a question mark is "stronger" than a period and is the mark that is retained.

Note that although this answer cites only CMOS, I'm fairly confident (based on experience) that most major style guides would recommend including a question mark (rather than a period) at the end of your example sentence.

By the way, I agree with Hot Licks (in a comment above) that a colon would work better than a dash here. Capitalizing the following letter is optional.

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  • What are the two examples given in CMOS? (I can't find this entry in my edition.) Commented Jun 3, 2023 at 2:27
  • @TinfoilHat 1) "Have you read the platform?" asked Mark. 2) What had she meant when she said, "The foot now wears a different shoe"? Commented Jun 3, 2023 at 4:27

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