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The agreement between nouns (collective, in this case) and verbs is called concord and much has been published on its often confusing rules of usage. The most interesting and informative article I found in the course of answering this question, was "ConcordConcord", by Marianne Drennan. (It is of South African origin, so it is likely closer to British English but, excellent article nonetheless.)

The agreement between nouns (collective, in this case) and verbs is called concord and much has been published on its often confusing rules of usage. The most interesting and informative article I found in the course of answering this question, was "Concord", by Marianne Drennan. (It is of South African origin, so it is likely closer to British English but, excellent article nonetheless.)

The agreement between nouns (collective, in this case) and verbs is called concord and much has been published on its often confusing rules of usage. The most interesting and informative article I found in the course of answering this question, was "Concord", by Marianne Drennan. (It is of South African origin, so it is likely closer to British English but, excellent article nonetheless.)

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(A) is not correct because the collective noun total should always be treated as plural when used in a definite*the plural sense. when

  1. it is explicitly used with the word, number, or the word, number, is implied (in a strict sense*),
  2. the items being counted are identified/clarified/specified, AND
  3. the size of the number is given.

Used in an indefinite* sense, thoughIn the following examples, total should be considered singular. Examplesall conditions are satisfied:

  • TheA total of number of 3500 students in attendance waswere unbelievably largeat the seminar. [Singular][Plural]
  • A total [number] of 11 shells are in my possession. [Plural]

In this example, conditions (1) and (2) are satisfied, but condition (3) isn't:

  • The total number of 3500 students in attendance werewas at the seminarunbelievably large. [Plural][Singular]

In the first sentence of this example, only condition (3) is satisfied, while none of the conditions is satisfied in the second sentence:

  • My total is 11. Theirs is much higher. [Singular]
  • A total of 11 [shells] are in my possession. [Plural]

Finally, in this case, condition (1) is not satisfied:

  • 'How many pennies do we now have?' 'The current total isis 22.' [Singular]

Thus, total should be treated as singular whenever these conditions are not satisfied at the same time. (This rule should not be applied with the construction There is/are.)

Also of note is the pronounced difference in the treatment of collective nouns between British and American English. Some collective nouns are mostly treated as singular in American English but often considered plural in British English. Two quick examples are team and family. See this note on grammar at Oxford Dictionaries Online for more information on this phenomenon. The treatment of total, however, transcends this analysis, which could be rather simplistic at times for the most part. Consider, however, another interesting example provided, in part, by the asker (@xport):


 
  • There are ten babies. [Universally correct]
  • There are ten babies in total. [Universally correct]
  • There are a total of ten babies. [Plural. British?]
  • There is a total of ten babies. [Singular. American?]

*The definition ofI'm not sure if the British/American analysis holds here, as one would find both forms (definitethere is/indefinitethere are here is proving elusive at the moment) widely used. There are certainly sounds better, but some would argue that there is is more correct, because, strictly speaking, total by itself should be a singular noun. ("Says who?" others may counter!) Consider this, though:

There is/are a total number of ten babies. [?!]

I hopewill not comment on this. Suffice it to say that this worrisome situation can always be avoided.


*in a strict sense since the readerword, total, always involves a number, anyway. Try to see if you can deduceinsert the sense in which I use these words fromword number into your sentence (if it isn't already there) without losing the examples I have providedintended meaning. I will update my answer when I find a better butIf this can be done, perhapsthen it means the word, less succinct alternativenumber is implied.

(A) is not correct because the collective noun total should be treated as plural when used in a definite* sense.

Used in an indefinite* sense, though, total should be considered singular. Examples:

  • The total number of students in attendance was unbelievably large. [Singular]
  • A total of number of 3500 students were at the seminar. [Plural]
  • My total is 11. Theirs is much higher. [Singular]
  • A total of 11 [shells] are in my possession. [Plural]
  • 'How many pennies do we now have?' 'The current total is 22.' [Singular]

Also of note is the pronounced difference in the treatment of collective nouns between British and American English. Some collective nouns are mostly treated as singular in American English but often considered plural in British English. Two quick examples are team and family. See this note on grammar at Oxford Dictionaries Online for more information on this phenomenon. The treatment of total, however, transcends this analysis, which could be rather simplistic at times.


 

*The definition of definite/indefinite here is proving elusive at the moment but I hope the reader can deduce the sense in which I use these words from the examples I have provided. I will update my answer when I find a better but, perhaps, less succinct alternative.

(A) is not correct because the collective noun total should always be treated in the plural sense when

  1. it is explicitly used with the word, number, or the word, number, is implied (in a strict sense*),
  2. the items being counted are identified/clarified/specified, AND
  3. the size of the number is given.

In the following examples, all conditions are satisfied:

  • A total of number of 3500 students were at the seminar. [Plural]
  • A total [number] of 11 shells are in my possession. [Plural]

In this example, conditions (1) and (2) are satisfied, but condition (3) isn't:

  • The total number of students in attendance was unbelievably large. [Singular]

In the first sentence of this example, only condition (3) is satisfied, while none of the conditions is satisfied in the second sentence:

  • My total is 11. Theirs is much higher. [Singular]

Finally, in this case, condition (1) is not satisfied:

  • 'How many pennies do we now have?' 'The current total is 22.' [Singular]

Thus, total should be treated as singular whenever these conditions are not satisfied at the same time. (This rule should not be applied with the construction There is/are.)

Also of note is the pronounced difference in the treatment of collective nouns between British and American English. Some collective nouns are mostly treated as singular in American English but often considered plural in British English. Two quick examples are team and family. See this note on grammar at Oxford Dictionaries Online for more information on this phenomenon. The treatment of total, however, transcends this analysis for the most part. Consider, however, another interesting example provided, in part, by the asker (@xport):

  • There are ten babies. [Universally correct]
  • There are ten babies in total. [Universally correct]
  • There are a total of ten babies. [Plural. British?]
  • There is a total of ten babies. [Singular. American?]

I'm not sure if the British/American analysis holds here, as one would find both forms (there is/there are) widely used. There are certainly sounds better, but some would argue that there is is more correct, because, strictly speaking, total by itself should be a singular noun. ("Says who?" others may counter!) Consider this, though:

There is/are a total number of ten babies. [?!]

I will not comment on this. Suffice it to say that this worrisome situation can always be avoided.


*in a strict sense since the word, total, always involves a number, anyway. Try to see if you can insert the word number into your sentence (if it isn't already there) without losing the intended meaning. If this can be done, then it means the word, number is implied.

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(B) is perfectly correct in either American or British English. Take a look at this example from the Cambridge Dictionaries Online:

A total of 21 horses were entered for the race.

(C) is also correct, as ten babies is explicitly plural, and should thus take the plural are.

(A) is not correct because the collective noun total should be treated as plural when used in a definite* sense.

Used in an indefinite* sense, though, total should be considered singular. Examples:

  • The total number of students in attendance was unbelievably large. [Singular]
  • A total of number of 3500 students were at the seminar. [Plural]
  • My total is 11. Theirs is much higher. [Singular]
  • A total of 11 [shells] are in my possession. [Plural]
  • 'How many pennies do we now have?' 'The current total is 22.' [Singular]

The agreement between nouns (collective, in this case) and verbs is called concord and much has been published on its often confusing rules of usage. The most interesting and informative article I found in the course of answering this question, was "Concord", by Marianne Drennan. (It is of South African origin, so it is likely closer to British English but, excellent article nonetheless.)

Also of note is the pronounced difference in the treatment of collective nouns between British and American English. Some collective nouns are mostly treated as singular in American English but often considered plural in British English. Two quick examples are team and family. See this note on grammar at Oxford Dictionaries Online for more information on this phenomenon. The treatment of total, however, transcends this analysis, which could be rather simplistic at times.


*The definition of definite/indefinite here is proving elusive at the moment but I hope the reader can deduce the sense in which I use these words from the examples I have provided. I will update my answer when I find a better but, perhaps, less succinct alternative.