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Apr 12, 2020 at 23:40 comment added LPH You could certainly find suspension points or an exclamation point ("Captain Smith! He led the charge and saved the Queen. Her generals? They just stood there petrified".) and there isn't a great difference. Why not a full stop, which gives the utterance the import of a recapitulating statement without the exclamatory turn?
Apr 12, 2020 at 19:38 history edited Jules Cocovin CC BY-SA 4.0
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Apr 12, 2020 at 19:31 comment added Jules Cocovin I went with the full stop because I read "Bob." as a nominal sentence meaning something along the lines of: "This is Bob in his entirety as far as both mind and body go." The other option I considered was the eM dash. But that may be my native tongue speaking inwhich the phrase in question it's not so uncommon.
Apr 12, 2020 at 19:16 history edited Jules Cocovin CC BY-SA 4.0
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Apr 12, 2020 at 17:07 comment added user373710 @Jules, I think subject doubling serves the purpose to emphasise what the subject did compared with other referents, as in "As for Bob, he...", but in this case a comma seems more appropriate than a full stop since it reflects a short prosodic interval.
Apr 12, 2020 at 16:55 comment added Hot Licks It is more idiomatic to use a comma rather than a period in the examples you give.
Apr 12, 2020 at 16:53 history answered Jules Cocovin CC BY-SA 4.0