Timeline for Is it acceptable to state conditions one after the other separated by commas but not have "and" or "or" in the end?
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Sep 23, 2018 at 13:06 | vote | accept | Nav | ||
Sep 23, 2018 at 8:03 | comment | added | Zebrafish | Wouldn't an initial colon to begin list, followed be semicolons between each list item be a good way? "You need to know your employees well: Who is unhappy at not getting a raise; who is hurt at being scolded by their boss; who is unable to tolerate the air-conditioning. Edit: sorry, I forgot AP style being a requirement. I have no idea if AP style allows this. | |
Sep 23, 2018 at 4:10 | answer | added | Jason Bassford | timeline score: 3 | |
Sep 23, 2018 at 3:34 | comment | added | Wayfaring Stranger | I'd stick a colon in place of that first period, so as to give folks a clue that a list is coming up. The list itself does not really constitute a sentence on its own. | |
Sep 23, 2018 at 1:49 | comment | added | Laurel♦ | It would probably look best formatted as a series of questions: "Who is unhappy at not getting a raise? Who is hurt at being scolded by their boss?" etc. | |
Sep 23, 2018 at 1:39 | history | asked | Nav | CC BY-SA 4.0 |