Timeline for Sentence construction/comma usage
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| Sep 17, 2018 at 23:16 | comment | added | Jason Bassford | @bluebell1 The sentence is still grammatical and meaningful without the presence of The Who drummer Keith Moon. It doesn't convey as much information (only that his drinking partner was somebody from Tommy), but it still functions as a sentence. It's like giving Keith Moon's age and phone number—that would be additionally interesting, but also not necessary. | |
| Sep 17, 2018 at 22:27 | comment | added | bluebell1 | with drinking partner/ with the two (This doesn't work when the non-essential information is taken out. Is there a mistake in this sentence ? | |
| Sep 17, 2018 at 22:26 | comment | added | bluebell1 | An alcoholic, Reed's issues with drink were well publicised, from appearances on chat shows to a high-profile friendship with drinking partner, The Who drummer Keith Moon, with the two meeting while working on Tommy. | |
| Aug 21, 2018 at 14:09 | history | edited | Jason Bassford | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
deleted 3 characters in body
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| Aug 21, 2018 at 14:04 | vote | accept | bluebell1 | ||
| Aug 5, 2018 at 23:35 | history | answered | Jason Bassford | CC BY-SA 4.0 |