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Jul 27, 2011 at 23:52 vote accept Yoichi Oishi
Jul 27, 2011 at 4:10 comment added aedia λ @Yoichi-san, I wouldn't worry that we find it that easy to read! The reason I don't find "a second" as easy to substitute as a possible meaning is that I must fill in a lot of other words to make it work: "one moment later he shouted at her," for example. My mind does fill these in at first - I might find the same meaning on a first read - but if read carefully and force myself not to fill in any seemingly missing words, "detective" is the only "one" that works.
Jul 27, 2011 at 2:37 comment added Cerberus - Reinstate Monica @Martha: Right, you could do that. It would change word order but make it much more readable.
Jul 27, 2011 at 2:20 comment added Yoichi Oishi @Malvolio / @Martha. I was relieved to find your comments, because I suspected if 'one later shouted at her’ in this sentence is taken for granted to any native speakers, allowing no room for questioning.
Jul 26, 2011 at 23:44 comment added Marthaª I'd actually rewrite it as She said that one detective later shouted at her, "You know you did it. Just admit it."
Jul 26, 2011 at 22:32 history answered Cerberus - Reinstate Monica CC BY-SA 3.0