Timeline for "Yet while the lowering of the wealth prerequisite provided an easy target for modern liberals..."
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| Sep 24, 2015 at 23:58 | comment | added | Mrt | :) I asked about the meaning of " easy target" ..these are my comments | |
| Sep 24, 2015 at 23:54 | comment | added | shaunxer | Now that I read into it further, it seems that how you say "manipulating the political scene" is a bit unnecessary and perhaps should be left out. Also there are some other structural flaws so a good correction might look like: "The wealth prerequisite was an obvious injustice and this could be enough to ignite protest." Does that help? | |
| Sep 24, 2015 at 23:45 | comment | added | Mrt | it is ok. I just gave two possible meanings that I inferred from the passage and asked which one correct is. | |
| Sep 24, 2015 at 23:43 | comment | added | shaunxer | Oh, haha. I guess I misunderstood what you were asking. | |
| Sep 24, 2015 at 23:35 | comment | added | Mrt | Thanks for your answer but I used the word obvious, it is not in the original passage which can be seen on the question | |
| Sep 24, 2015 at 23:33 | history | answered | shaunxer | CC BY-SA 3.0 |