Timeline for Which did X and which was Y
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| May 13, 2015 at 11:43 | comment | added | joeav | Yeah, but... in population terms I figured immigrants would be less distracting than androids. My personal take on it. (it's androids in the text, immigrants for the purpose of this post) | |
| May 12, 2015 at 16:08 | comment | added | David Pugh | Well, everyone is an immigrant somewhere, so I don't know how successful that toning-down was. The androids aren't complaining yet. | |
| May 12, 2015 at 15:54 | comment | added | joeav | Thank you. The school is in a sense "bigger than the town". I was asking if the second "which" was necessary in the current phrasing. I should have added more context to allow for phrasing suggestions. The sentence before goes something along the lines of "but the island's biggest attraction was [name of town]..." And it's actually "androids", not "immigrants", I tried to tone the context down | |
| May 12, 2015 at 15:45 | history | answered | David Pugh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |