Timeline for can hardly read ... and feel
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| Feb 13, 2015 at 8:17 | comment | added | oerkelens | @Barmar: good point, without the second I the parallel is more clear. | |
| Feb 13, 2015 at 8:17 | history | edited | oerkelens | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Feb 13, 2015 at 8:12 | comment | added | Barmar |
For the parallism between your examples and the original sentences to be better, you should elide I in the second clause: and ate breakfast.
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| Feb 13, 2015 at 8:00 | history | answered | oerkelens | CC BY-SA 3.0 |