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Aug 12, 2020 at 11:21 review Close votes
Aug 17, 2020 at 3:03
Aug 12, 2020 at 11:11 comment added Edwin Ashworth Once you're below sentence level, 'grammaticality' becomes (I'm tempted to add 'even') less well-defined. And then there's the complication of headlinese that may be used in posters. Your critic should state the grounds for the criticism. If they're merely style considerations (and I don't see what else they could be), that would be off-topic as a point for discussion here on ELU. BUT I'd say that if you have a ghost hunt, the regular noun rather than the ing-form is far punchier. But I'd use i/Including after-hours ghost hunt! (capitalised if not a smooth follow-on; italicised; silly font).
Sep 16, 2014 at 19:06 comment added Frank Just out of interest, what is an 'After hours ghost hunt', does it involve staying in a pub after hours and hunting ghosts and does it involve emptying bottles and glasses while searching for them?
Sep 16, 2014 at 18:48 review Close votes
Sep 17, 2014 at 15:44
Sep 16, 2014 at 18:08 comment added WS2 @Dave it is a clause, I suspect adjectival.
Sep 16, 2014 at 18:06 answer added Fattie timeline score: 2
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:55 comment added Dave @WS2 if it not a sentence, what would you call it. With no sarcasm meant at all, I can't call it a collection of strings?!
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:51 vote accept Dave
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:51 vote accept Dave
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:51
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:50 answer added Michael Lorton timeline score: 2
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:49 comment added WS2 @Dave I don't see how either can be regarded as a sentence as neither contains an indicative verb. 'Including' is a present participle and the whole subordinate, adjectivally, to the main clause.
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:47 comment added Fattie Yes, I'm totally with you now -- sorry
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:46 comment added Dan Bron @Joe, see my comment below your answer on "headlines". I don't think these are headlines, and I don't think "posters" (as in large pieces of paper with stuff printed on them) are involved.
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:46 comment added Fattie Dan dude - headlines are "language fragments" - NOT sentences. It's quite hard to find a headline or poster-copy that is a "whole sentence". Note too often they are simply "labels" (like on this page, "English language and usage" up top)
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:45 answer added Fattie timeline score: 1
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:44 comment added Dan Bron @Dave, I'd expect these "sentences" to be embedded as clauses in larger sentences. In other words "Blah blah blah, including ghost-hunting after hours." That said, it's perfectly fine to break them out into sentences of their own. Either way, the second sentence is missing an article: "a ghost hunt...".
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:44 history edited Dave CC BY-SA 3.0
edited title
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:44 comment added Fattie He just explained IT IS A HEADLINE, NOT a sentence.
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:41 history edited Dan Bron CC BY-SA 3.0
fix typo in title
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:41 comment added Dave @Gary'sStudent, yes it is! It is the full sentence. There was content before this, which ended with a full stop. Then the line above, as is!
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:38 comment added Gary's Student These are not full sentences. Give us more context and we can help you construct full sentences.
Sep 16, 2014 at 17:36 history asked Dave CC BY-SA 3.0