Timeline for Punctuation for and clarity of repeating verbs
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| Aug 24, 2010 at 14:04 | comment | added | Kosmonaut | "Of those who responded, everyone felt that backups are an essential expense." If your goal is clarity, then I still think there is no reason to structure the sentence such that you have the verb of an embedded clause butted right up next to the verb of the main clause. | |
| Aug 24, 2010 at 3:22 | comment | added | Vaibhav Garg | But not everyone responded. I intended to make this clear that this might not be the opinion of the general populace. | |
| Aug 23, 2010 at 18:40 | history | answered | Kosmonaut | CC BY-SA 2.5 |