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Are the following both grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (Usage context: book, not an essay).

Original:

He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.

Friend's suggestion:

He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original record.

Are the following both grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (Usage context: book, not an essay).

Original:

He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.

Friend's suggestion:

He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original record.

Are the following both grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (Usage context: book, not an essay).

Original: He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.

Friend's suggestion: He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original record.

Are the following both grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (Usage context: book, not an essay).

Original:

He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.

Friend's suggestion:

He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original record.

Are both the following grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (usage context: book, not an essay)

Original: He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.

Friend's suggestion: He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original record.

Are the following both grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (Usage context: book, not an essay).

Original: He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.

Friend's suggestion: He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original record.