Timeline for Writing "A , so B, so C..." for series of implications
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| Nov 30, 2012 at 4:56 | comment | added | avpaderno |
Most importantly, why does she need to know? ;)
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| Nov 30, 2012 at 4:55 | history | edited | avpaderno | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Aug 21, 2012 at 2:37 | history | edited | avpaderno | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Aug 21, 2012 at 2:29 | comment | added | Chris | So true. The causality of those fragments is asserted falsely by using "so" to enforce it. The sequence itself is also mostly contrived and not of causal nature. You can re-order all the fragments to any arrangement or break up into sentences, without losing meaning. Lastly, I'd like to know, who is she and what is she being told? | |
| Jan 26, 2011 at 10:55 | history | answered | avpaderno | CC BY-SA 2.5 |