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First of all, "floundered" is wrong. "Flounder" is intransitive. You can't "flounder" something. Maybe it's a typo and you mean "foundered," metaphorically relating the situation to a sinking ship, but then you'd be mixing metaphors. So maybe you mean "flubbed." Or maybe you mean "floundered" and "the attempt" is what needs to go. I don't know. Whatever ...


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