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Noah
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Would like you vs. please

I am writing an email, in which I would like to ask for something but I don't want to be very direct. I came up with the following two constructions:

In addition, I will not be receiving my stipend while working. So please consider my remuneration package carefully.

In addition, I will not be receiving my stipend while working. So I would like you to consider my remuneration package carefully.

Any additional improvements are welcome.

Noah
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