As an ESL student, sometimes I wonder whether I use too many pronouns. For example:
She grabbed her purse, she took some money and then she went to buy some groceries. After that she returned happily with a lot of things she bought.
Can it be changed to something like this?
She grabbed her purse, took some money and then went to buy some groceries. After that returned happily with a lot of things she bought.
When can you get rid of the pronouns without losing the sense of the person or object you’re referring to? Where can I get more information about this?