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Which is correct?

The newspaper described the success of people like Bob and Joe.

The newspaper described the successes of people like Bob and Joe.

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Both sentences are correct, since success can be used as a countable or uncountable noun.

  • Which one do you think sounds better? – David Zhu Aug 20 '12 at 22:59
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    "The success of" is much more common and sounds more natural to me: books.google.com/ngrams/… . You would use successes of if you were pointing out two distinct kinds of success, though. – Jeremy Aug 20 '12 at 23:05
  • +1 I would favour successes in contexts where I was also acknowledging the failures either explicitly or (thouh less likely) implicitly, I think. – Wudang Aug 21 '12 at 12:17
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Both are correct, but have slightly different meanings.

"Describing the success" of someone has a more general tone. For instance, the article might discuss Bob's overall career - e.g. "he rose to the top of his company and turned it into the worldwide market leader it is today."

"Describing the successes" of someone implies a discussion of each particular triumph. For instance, the article might discuss particular events in Bob's career - e.g. "his high-quality tender won his company the crucial widget contract with GloboCorp. He then was selected as team leader despite being the youngest on his team."

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Both are correct in their own sense.

Success can be pronounced as the dual meaning to target one or more than one person i.e., countable as mentioned above.

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