I am creating an email signature and want to say 'You would have many more bucks if you quit passing them'. I am wanting to say it generally but not to use 'we' as I don't want to include myself. I was thinking 'One would have many more bucks if (they or he/she does not seem to fit) quit passing them". Is 'they' correct? Is there a more elegant way to express this? thanks, ds
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How about "one would have many more bucks if one quits passing them"?– JoachimCommented Jul 12, 2022 at 21:41
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My opinion, either don't include a saying, or at least don't include that one.– aparente001Commented Jul 15, 2022 at 1:44
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