Thanks for your time, below sentence is a sales achievement written in the summary at the beginning of my resume:
...sealing the deals, settling the exclusive design architectures of the to be implemented two generations’ Wireless Presentation Gateway and led the projects to manage the products’ design, development, manufacturing, and shipping.
How is the readability of the "to be implemented" used in this sentence? A proofread company told me that it was grammatically correct, but it was not quite intuitive to read. Any suggestion or the usage here is just fine?
Here is another example I found online: