In my humble attempt at writing a classy formal letter, I am stuck with a bug in my brain .. probably due to my background of a non-native speaker of English.
I am trying to draw the reader's attention to an issue related to my mobile device causing heating issues.
I wrote the below:
I would like to draw your attention to an issue pertaining to my recently purchased XYZ mobile overheating....
Should it be, instead:
I would like --"-- an issue that pertains to my recently purchased --"--