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Context: Hospital setting – Referral Letter

  1. She presented today with symptoms of COPD.
  2. She presented herself today with symptoms of COPD.

In both cases, to the hospital is omitted. Are both correct? The first sentence somehow doesn't ring right.

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    Don't you mean "doesn't ring true"? "Doesn't ring right" rings no bells for me. :)
    – tchrist
    Commented Sep 13, 2020 at 15:56

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It is common in medicine, either in practice or in medical literature, to talk of a patient presenting (intransitive).
For example: "The patient presented with interstitial oedematous pancreatitis."

To present: To appear for examination or treatment, said of a patient.
[Farlex Partner Medical Dictionary]

A letter of referral from the diagnosing doctor to the hospital doctors would therefore normally say "She presented today with symptoms of COPD". The inclusion of "herself" is redundant in this usage.

The full context of the letter is not clear from your question but I assume it to be from a diagnosing doctor (either in the hospital or in general practice) to a hospital doctor. In either case "to the hospital" or "at the hospital" is not needed because the context is entirely clear. Nor is the phrase needed as a qualifier to "she presented".

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  • Sorry but I noticed nothing. Your edits are usually pretty good so please do it again if you can :)
    – Anton
    Commented Sep 13, 2020 at 17:56
  • Thank you for that.
    – Anton
    Commented Sep 13, 2020 at 17:59
  • Thanks Anton! Grew up used to using the `redundant' rule, perhaps! Commented Sep 14, 2020 at 3:06
  • @VinooRobert Gracious of you. Thanks :)
    – Anton
    Commented Sep 14, 2020 at 7:26

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