I have this sentence in Russian I need to translate into English: "Звучит объявление о регистрации на рейс Кабул - Гонконг."

The best I can come up with is this: "An announcement rings out about the start of the check-in for the Kabul - Hong Kong flight."

But, I am not sure if 'check-in' is supposed to be "the start of the check-in" or "the start of check-in". In all honestly I would have changed it to say, "An announcement rings out to begin boarding the Kabul - Hong Kong flight." but the original author is quite adamant about this check-in phase, which is not something that airports typically announce. Any tips would be appreciated.

  • The author is right: the opening of check-in and the beginning of boarding are quite distinct. The first usually occurs several hours before the second.
    – phoog
    Commented Sep 1, 2020 at 15:43
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    Allow me (following your guidelines): The check-in announcement for the Kabul-Hong Kong flight is about to be made [or heard]. I would stay away from: rings out unless you are writing a novel or movie script. Is that the case? Sounds like a script.
    – Lambie
    Commented Sep 1, 2020 at 18:36
  • Either one is fine, though most native English speakers (who have traveled much) would probably not use "the".
    – Hot Licks
    Commented Sep 1, 2020 at 22:26

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My intuition is that both check-in and the check-in are acceptable. Google Ngrams seems to agree. And it's fairly easy to find of the check-in used on the Internet.

However, as @Edwin Ashworth points out in a comment, most of the hits for the check-in use check-in to modify a following noun, like start of the check-in line. So the most idiomatic usage would be the start of check-in.

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    I've been checking raw Google data. I believe the Ngrams are misleading because of the large number of false positives using check-in attributively, such as "start of the check-in line", "start of the check-in time", "start of the check-in process","start of the check-in window", "start of the check-in period" -"start of the check-in date". And 10.8 million results collapses to 20. I'd say 'start of check-in' is far more idiomatic. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:49
  • @EdwinAshworth: good catch. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:51
  • I'm still ... exercised, I suppose about OP's 'An announcement rings out about ...'. It sounds more like vivid fiction than conversational banality. Perhaps it's supposed to. As you (essentially) say in the comment, the register and overtones are as important as accurate semantics. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 12:01
  • @Edwin: I can't actually think of a better verb than rings out to use there, so if you want a word-for-word translation you might be stuck with rings out. (And this may be why the translator used rings out.) But you could rewrite it as An announcement came over the loudspeaker about... Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 12:44
  • Sets the usual airport tone. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 14:32

Ignat, would you be able to provide some additional context? There are a number of possibilities to re-phrase your sentence, and without further clarification it may be difficult to decide how to express the author's intended meaning.

Is this a fiction or a non-fiction story? Is the emphasis on the sound, the noise made by an announcement which happens to be an announcement about registration for Flight Kabul-HK, or on the substance of the announcement itself? For example, 'the protagonist fell asleep and was woken up by a loud noise, which was an announcement...' or 'they announced that registration for flight Kabul-HK was open'; of course, it may be a combination of both. The author uses an inversion, and you propose the term 'rings out'. These suggest an emphasis on the sound itself. In either case, it might make sense to phrase it differently.

The author appears to insist that it is check-in/registration, while you seem to be inclined to change 'registration' to 'boarding'. When is the story taking place? In the past, on arrival at the airport, first, passengers would check-in/register for their flight; announcements of a kind 'check-in for flight N... is now open, go to counter N...' would have been frequent; at check-in, the airline would register those who are present to take the flight; the passengers would then go through security and wait in the boarding area until an announcement about boarding would invite them to board the plane; now, passengers check-in online; on arrival at the airport, passengers go through security and then - to the gate, where the airline would make announcements notifying the passengers that the flight is ready for boarding. If the author is adamant about 'registration', it may mean that it is material to the story, so, again, to decide whether you wish to refer to boarding or check-in, more context information would help. Of course, if it is a science fiction, or some imaginary period in time, then it is for the author to decide whether he/she wishes the announcement to be about check-in/registration or boarding (the protagonists would be doing different things in each case).

Also, the announcement, in the author's words, does NOT state that it is the start of 'registration'/check-in; the author simply tells us that (verbatim) there sounds an announcement about 'registration' for flight Kabul-HK. In the past, after the airline opened check-in/registration (or boarding) for a flight, announcements about check-in/registration (or boarding) would have been repeated continually. It may be material to the story whether the announcement refers to the start of..., or it is a repeated reminder about the check-in counter or the boarding gate being open.

In very general terms, in circumstances where stylistic and/or artistic devices are material to author's intended meaning, it is important to think through carefully how to convey the author's style in another language. What is technically possible in one language may not be possible in another, or not to the same extent (hence, the question about the use of inversion by the author; also, though the author probably speaks of 'an announcement', this will be clarified in the broader context).

Of course, if what you are working on is a simple non-fiction factual piece, there is no need for things to become so complicated.

P.S. For a very general introduction to translation work, see these recent articles about Elena Ferrante's translator Ann Goldstein in NYT and Esquire:

Every writer has challenges. Ferrante’s writing is very intense and dense. ... Hers [sentences] are clear, but they’re going somewhere. They're like, vroom! It's hard to capture that and still keep it readable in English. Somehow Italian does that better, or it's easier in Italian to do that. That's the biggest challenge.

Goldstein describes herself as a highly literal translator, an approach that serves Ferrante’s idiosyncratic prose well, Reynolds said. “It takes a great deal of humility and a great deal of courage to represent so closely what an author wrote in the original language.”


I used Deepl to translate this sentence, and this is how it was translated:

Sounds like an announcement to check in for flight Kabul - Hong Kong.

An alternative for this translation would be:

Check-in is announced for the flight Kabul - Hong Kong.

I don't speak Russian, but I know that Deepl translations are quite accurate. So if this translation is correct, "check in" would be used as a verb, and not as a noun.

Anyway, using the way you translated this sentence (which may be more accurate since computer-assisted translations are often prone to errors only fluent speakers can spot), I would write "An announcement rings out the check-in start for the Kabul Hong Kong flight."

As for your claim that the word "check-in" is not often announced, I have heard it in airports, though it was in Germany, maybe it's different somewhere else.

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    Is it idiomatic to use 'ring out' with direct objects such as 'check-in start'? Glad tidings, maybe, at Christmas. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:29
  • Check in can be either a verb or a noun. If the OP wants to use it as a noun, there is nothing ungrammatical about that. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:33
  • @EdwinAshworth I was wondering about this also, that's why my prefered translation would be "Check-in is announced for the flight Kabul - Hong Kong.". But since I don't speak Russian, I wouldn't know if this is the correct translation at all.
    – Cyhiraeth
    Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:37
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    регистрация is a noun. And whether translations preserve parts of speech has relatively little to do with how accurate they are. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:44
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    @Peter The 'accurate' of the word-for-word translator seems to be rather different. Commented Aug 31, 2020 at 11:55

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