English is not my first language. In my mother tongue, I was advised by a language expert some years ago that a well-written text should contain as few repetitions of the same words as possible, in order to improve the text attractiveness and readability.

To achieve this, the advice I was given was to make use of synonyms. Having practiced the rule in my mother-tongue, as well as having paid attention to words being repeated in texts written by others, I have reached the conclusion that the "trick" does seem to work in making the texts more appealing to read.

(Did you notice that above, I decided to use "appealing" instead of "attractive"? :) )

I would like to think that the "trick" should work across all languages, English language including. Would the use of synonyms in order to void repetition of the same words be encouraged by English language experts to improve text legibility?

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    You may find this is a very good idea to use sometimes, and a bad idea to use other times. Jun 23, 2020 at 14:09
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    Avoiding too much repetition of words is generally good practice if you want your text to read well. There are, of course, many exceptional situations when you might actively choose to repeat certain words, for emphasis or for other reasons. You can use synonyms for variety, but you can also vary phrases and use other devices. So yes, as long as you're open to exceptions, you're on the right track. Jun 23, 2020 at 14:19
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    Your question seems to be about the pleasure that a reader experiences when reading a text with frequent use of synonyms. This is not readability, which is concerned with comprehensibility, as measured by formulas such as Flesch-Kincaid. Nor is it legibility, which is concerned with the size and clarity of the letters and words. German journalism is notorious for synonyms. And as a non-native German speaker I sometimes get confused when, for example, a Wildschwein (boar) is suddenly referred to later in the article as a Paarhufer (even-toed ungulate). (I agree with @Yosef Baskin)
    – Shoe
    Jun 23, 2020 at 14:52
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    Thank you @Shoe for the comment. I am actually not German, but I see where you're coming from. Good point you raise with "legibility" and "readability": obviously, I tried to use "synonyms" here that aren't really synonyms! And you are right: I am referring to the pleasure that a reader should derive. Your post already illustrates that I better be careful with trying to overuse synonyms that actually don't work as synonyms. Jun 23, 2020 at 14:57
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    It is common but can be overdone. See elegant variation.
    – The Photon
    Jun 23, 2020 at 17:13

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This is a matter of style, on which people disagree. In the past, people in English-speaking countries, just like the OP, have been taught that such ‘elegant variation’ is desirable, that it makes writing more interesting and appealing, and shows the writer to be sophisticated and educated. Some people nowadays still receive such advice as a part of their education. Much of the present-day stylistic advice, however, goes against the practice, or at least against striving too hard to create variation where it does not occur spontaneously. The opponents of the practice sometimes mockingly refer to it as ‘inelegant variation’.

Consider the following simple example:

I contribute to this site only when I have some free time. These days I don’t have much free time, so I don’t contribute much.

The style here is unremarkable, but the logical structure of what is being said is perfectly clear. Now suppose that one rewrites that as:

I contribute to this site only when I have some free time. These days I don’t have much leisure, so I don’t contribute much.

Is this an improvement? The proponents of (in)elegant variation will say that it is, because switching from 'free time' in the first sentence to 'leisure' in the second livens up the text; they would regard the repetition of free time in the original version as off-puttingly monotonous. The opponents will, on the other hand, object that the switch between the two terms obscures the logical structure of what has been said: to appreciate that structure, we now need the additional step of realising that free time and leisure function as synonyms here. While that step is fairly unproblematic and easy in this case, it does add slightly to the mental work one has to do to fully process the text; if (in)elegant variation is practised throughout a long text on a complex subject, the extra burden can make the text substantially more difficult to understand.

Competent, thoughtful people differ on which of these two kinds of consideration they find more weighty. One may also regard them as having different weights in different contexts, and so avoid (in)elegant variation when clarity is of utmost importance, but allow oneself to indulge in it when the nature of the communication allows room for playfulness.

One piece of advice that most people would probably agree on, though, is that one should not attempt (in)elegant variation unless one is thoroughly familiar with the meanings of the terms that one intends to use as synonyms, so as to be fully confident that they can function as synonyms in the given context. In other words, one should not attempt to create such variation by using as a synonym something that one has found by consulting a thesaurus but is not otherwise acquainted with.

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    Good answer, especially the bit about "avoiding elegant variation when clarity is of utmost importance". I work with English language learners. They generally find texts in which words or expressions are repeated a lot easier to understand than texts with liberal use of synonyms. The same goes for hypernyms. In the following science text, the ESL student may not immediately understand that prey is a hypernym of penguin and refers to it: "The killer whale tosses the penguin into the air and generally torments its prey before eating it."
    – Shoe
    Jun 25, 2020 at 7:35

English is particularly rich in synonyms as it has words of Germanic, French, Latin, and even Greek heritage.

I recommend judicious use of synonym to break the monotony, However:

What is important is to maintain register (see note). In general, Germanic terms are used in an informal register whilst those deriving from French, Latin and Greek, sound formal and perhaps more 'educated'.

For example

"He's right down in the dumps." Is informal whereas "He's suffering from severe depression" is formal.

It would be very unusual to mix these registers by saying, for example, "He has a severe case of the dumps." It might of course be used for shock value or humorously.


We use the term ‘register’ to refer to particular varieties or styles of speaking and writing. Registers vary because the language is used for different purposes, in different contexts and for different audiences. For example, there is a legal register, a register of advertising, registers of banking and a register of weather forecasting. We commonly recognise registers because of their specialised vocabulary but also because of particular uses of grammar. We also use the term register to refer to whether language is being used formally or informally: …* https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/register

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