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I'm trying to write a paragraph for a question for my biology class. The question is "How are organisms (and non-living things) interconnected within Serengeti National Park? He wants us to include "Trophic Cascade" and "Keystone Species" from our vocabulary list. I know what I'm going to write, I just don't know if I'm using this sentence correctly.

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    The text in your title is ungrammatical (incorrectly written; it's = it is, its = belonging to it). But other than that it could only "make sense" if we knew what "it" refers to. Besides which trophic cascade probably won't be a familiar term to most people.
    – FumbleFingers
    Apr 9, 2020 at 16:56
  • Thank you for pointing that out, I had fixed it. However, regarding the last part, I have to use the word as per my teacher's request.
    – Kyra
    Apr 9, 2020 at 17:01
  • One example of what would be "its trophic cascade"? I'll assume "it" is "the Serengeti National Park", but without knowing what "that" is I still can't have any idea what you're actually saying. So I've no idea if it makes sense to say it.
    – FumbleFingers
    Apr 9, 2020 at 17:13
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    "it is (it's) a trophic cascade" might suit better if I get your sense. Presumably you would refer to a particular species in your analysis and remark that it's a keystone species or even the keystone in your view. We can't identify one for you here, that's your job.
    – Jiminy Cricket.
    Apr 9, 2020 at 17:16

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