I am writing a scientific paper on how a cancer staging system may be improved. However, I am a non-native English speaker, and I am concerned that my current title reflects that too much.
Please, how may this sentence be rephrased or improved to encapsulate the meaning in a more elegant way?
Approaching a more patient-tailored N-staging of x cancer
Specifically, it is the a more part I do not like. In my research paper, I have evaluated three commonly applied approaches to cancer staging and introduced a new approach that includes specific patient parameters to a greater extent than seen in the previous approaches.
Thank you in advance. Best.