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I want to use it in this sentence ' Regarding my educational journey, it is glaring that studying and doing research are endeavors I would like to engage in even more'

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    What is wrong in it? You may even consider 'pursuit' in place of journey. The usual ways is, ...pursue one's studies/ interests etc.
    – Ram Pillai
    Nov 9, 2019 at 6:55

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The sentence is confusing. Unless, of course, you intend to convey that it is a great error on your part to undertake both the activities that you have mentioned in your quest to achieve, what you possibly perceive to be, excellence in education of a sort that is, not at the present point of time, impossible for me to imagine or speculate.

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  • Obviously, my response has fallen foul of one who considers a specific adjective in the sentence not entirely out of place. It is merely a conjecture and I suffer from a condition that makes my digital skin akin to a pachyderm.
    – Fruitjam
    Nov 9, 2019 at 7:06

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