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While writing my history essays, I've run into some issues in the past with being marked off for not writing in the past tense. I'm a bit confused about the complications of some of my sentences and trying to put them into the past tense.

Is this sentence fully in the past tense?

This suggested that one must approach the interpretation of a historical figure with consideration to the prevailing atmospheres, states of affairs, and conditions present with respect to that period in time, and only then, by virtue of this approach, would one be able to accurately evaluate a historical event or figure.

I'm specifically wondering if my use of "suggested" in the beginning sets the whole sentence to be in the past tense, but when I say "would one be able to accurately evaluate a historical event" I don't know if it has to be changed. If it is wrong, would this be correct phrasing? - "would one have been able to have accurately evaluated"

In other words, do all verbs have to be in the past tense to meet this requirement? I am writing about what a historian said in an essay if that helps. Also, as a secondary question, could my list of considerations be phrased as "prevailing atmosphere, state of affairs, and conditions" or do they all have to be plural since I want conditions to be plural?

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    I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it relates to academic studies and the submission of essays. You should seek the guidance of your teacher(s). – Tuffy Oct 8 '19 at 22:34
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    A bit off topic, but your sentence is difficult to parse and runs on. You'll have an easier time writing if you edit this into different sentences. – jimm101 Oct 8 '19 at 22:39
  • @Tuffy I disagree. There is a specific question about grammar here. It even meets the criteria for a proofreading question as it highlights the specific areas of concern. – David M Oct 8 '19 at 22:40
  • @DavidM Superficially, perhaps. But what is needed here is a depth of teaching for which this site is not suited. It is for the teacher to help. – Tuffy Oct 8 '19 at 22:49
  • There is no way to decide whether it should be suggests or suggested. Goodness. – Lambie Oct 9 '19 at 16:01
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When speaking of an action in the past, you use the past tense. This is a simple rule. But, when you are speaking of an action that involves an ongoing description of something that took place in the past, then you can mix the tenses as you have above. The example sentence you've given is just particularly complex, so let's break it down and see if we can understand what's going on.

If you look at your sentence, you're talking about the past action of suggesting something. In this case that one must approach ...

If we make the sentence simpler, we can see the following structure emerge:

This suggested that we approach the problem differently.

It would not then be necessary to switch to the past tense after the word suggested. It wouldn't really be logical to say:

This suggested that we approached the problem differently.

The only thing that actually took place in the past was the suggestion. What was suggested to the people in question was in their present. Hence we'd use the present tense. (Many languages would use an imperfect tense here, but English doesn't always have a conjugation for that.)

With regard to your second question, it is perfectly reasonable to use a singular case in cases where the consideration itself is singular. (i.e. There is only one atmosphere, state of affairs, or condition). I would probably use the singular for atmosphere and state of affairs as these concepts tend to be all encompassing. But pluralize conditions as there is usually more than one condition at play.

As an aside, I would likely split your sentence into two just for readability:

This suggested that one must approach the interpretation of a historical figure with consideration to the prevailing atmosphere, state of affairs, and conditions present with respect to that period in time. Only then would one be able to accurately evaluate a historical event or figure.

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"This suggested" could refer to something that was suggested by someone. Here is an example of that:

1) In chapter 1, I noted that by the late 1980s practicing historians were becoming attuned to the wider discussion in the humanities. Some suggested that historians, freed at last from the misguided imperative of representation, could do more kinds of things and thereby expand their cultural function. But this confidence betrayed presentist and aestheticist accents that provoked more traditional historians to insist more tenaciously on the old self-understanding. The result was confusion and a debilitating polarization in historiography.

Past, Process, and Contest in Contemporary Historiography Historiographical Openness

"This suggests" can refer to something that is "invariable". The present simple to used to state simple "truths" that are true or universal when written as a general proposition.

And here is an example of the present simple:

2) The essay suggests that, to the extent that revision is understood as the result of the combined effect of psychological, social, and professional determinations, it is unlikely that there will ever be genuine consensus about the sources of revision in history, since all historians bring to their work differing congeries of psychological preoccupations, social positions, and professional commitments.

Part of an abstract for an article entitled Revising the Past/Revisiting the Present: How Change Happens in Historiography

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