I'm having a hard time with some lyrics that I've been writing. The verb "to soak" got me stuck, because I'm not sure if I'm using it correctly.
At first, I wanted to say:
"Girl, by tomorrow we will be apart/ Until the morning, let us soak as feelings pour."
However, I'm not sure if it's right. When I say "let's soak as feelings pour", I want it to mean "let's get soaked". I've seen a couple examples in the internet where "soak" is being used instead of "get soaked", as in "I wanna soak in your sea" (excerpt of a song by "Cactus"). So, can anyone help me with this? I'm really stuck.
Another little thing, I have these other two options. I don't like how they sound with the melody, but they work: "'til then, wanna soak in you as feelings pour." "'til then, let us soak in love as feelings pour.""
Is it correct? Or ar there any problems with the way it's written?