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I'm writing about a person who comes into the room twice and both times turns the light on and then off.

I'm wondering if I can avoid repetition with the expressions like

  • taps the light switch (off);
  • slams the switch on;
  • shuts the light (off).

Are those three grammatically correct? Or maybe there are more common ways to say that?

Thank you!

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    How about "Switch the light on/off"? Jul 10, 2019 at 16:50
  • slam is a forceful action. Slam a light switch and you could break it. Why would you be seeking to avoid repetition when you've gone out of your way to include a repetitive action in your story? Just sayin'
    – TimR
    Aug 19 at 16:19
  • Extinguish the light ... Kindle the light ...
    – GEdgar
    Aug 19 at 21:07

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taps the light switch (off)

and

slams the switch on

both sound fine to me, although the first might suggest a neutral or tentative mood and the second is more aggressive.

shut the light off

is rarely used in the context of operating a switch and sounds odd. It's probably more appropriate in a situation where the light is being blocked, for example by closing a door.

In addition to Stu W's suggestion of 'flipping the switch', you could also use:

She clicked the light switch on and off again

or

She flicked the light switch on and off again

I use 'light switch' in these examples and not just 'light' because I think 'turn on the light' could refer to a number of ways of switching a lamp on, whereas 'clicking' and 'flicking' (and 'flipping') are more specific to the typical type of plastic wall switch you'd find in modern buildings.

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Flipped the switch.

Joe came into the room and flipped the switch, bathing the whole area in warm shades of yellow.

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  • Note of interest...a breaker box is called a flip-on in many parts of Latin America. Jul 12, 2019 at 13:48
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Sometimes, even using different words, a thing can still be repetitive. You could change it more by changing the structure.

For example:

He peered into the darkness curiously until his hand found the switch again.

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