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We have the following text on a feedback page on a website we have been working on:

“We'd love to hear what you think about any [Product name] feature or aspect — including anything you'd like to see changed or improved!”

I just realised someone probably wouldn’t suggest a change if it wasn’t going to improve the product. So the last three words may not make sense. Do they? Is there a better way to word it?

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    I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or". – Hot Licks Mar 22 at 12:02

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