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  1. Please share your offers with me to evaluate.
  2. Please share your offers to evaluate with me.
  3. Please share with me to evaluate your offers.

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  • Firstly, must I point out that "gramatically" is spelt with a double m; i.e. "grammatically" ;) – Mr Pie Feb 13 at 11:47
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    Thank you for correcting. what about my question? :) – annekess Feb 13 at 12:04
  • ...I am thinking... I think I know the answer, but to answer your question on this site, I need to provide some evidence and not just some mere intuition. (+1) :P – Mr Pie Feb 13 at 12:10
  • You're trying to "fuse" two different constructions - share X with me and [in order] for me to evaluate [X]. This can't really work with a single instance of the word me, no matter how you arrange the other elements. – FumbleFingers Feb 13 at 13:25
  • Thanks for your answer. "Please share your offers with me for me to evaluate them." Is this the correct sentence? As far as I understand, the other forms are unclear and incorrect. – annekess Feb 13 at 13:36
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The first two are grammatically ok but could be interpreted slightly differently.

Please share your offers with me to evaluate.

This suggests that you share the offers you've had with me and then I will evaluate them.

Please share your offers to evaluate with me.

This suggests that you share the offers you've had with me and then we will evaluate them together.

The last is a clumsy construction which leaves it unclear what should be shared with me.

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