Is this English correct?

Show me Product with Originations greater than 1MM.


For more than a million dollars, show me originations and product.

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  • One is noticeably more comprehensible than the other, but both are really quite bad. That said, we don't do proofreading here. If you have a specific question about a specific word, go ahead. – RegDwigнt Feb 11 at 13:21

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