Could you please let me know if you would like to have a draft to work upon.

How good is this sentence which is part of a larger email

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  • It’s grammatical. – Lawrence Feb 11 at 5:18
  • Please let me know if you'd like me to send a first draft to work with. – aparente001 Feb 11 at 6:57