I know it's a bit clunky, but is it improper?
put on hold as off-topic by J. Taylor, Rand al'Thor, Chenmunka, choster, user240918 2 days ago
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- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – J. Taylor, Rand al'Thor, Chenmunka, choster, user240918