What is a formal noun that critically describes a proposal that has not been thought through and fails to consider challenge or consequences?

e.g., "Without explaining why your objective is difficult to achieve, and exploring its potential unintended consequences, the proposal is unconvincing, and comes across as a X."

My research has not turned up any appropriate single word. All single words I've come across imply nothing about the quality of the proposal, e.g., plan, idea, scheme, project, program, manifesto, motion, proposition, suggestion, action point, submission, trial balloon

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  • Edited to add connotation, register (formality), and part of speech; and I mentioned the research I've done. The question is not a learners' question -- I'm a native speaker and I've consulted with a number of other native speakers who cannot think of a single word – Dr. Beeblebrox Nov 8 at 17:41
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  • Added research details – Dr. Beeblebrox Nov 8 at 17:47
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    What specifically is wrong with impractical, impracticable, unworkable, unfeasible, non-viable, etc.? Are you going to insist that any suggestion should unambiguously convey that the speaker thinks whoever proposed the idea is naive? – FumbleFingers Nov 8 at 18:24

A proposal which is not thorough enough typically has less chances to succeed and may consequently be considered a non-starter.

..., the proposal is unconvincing, and comes across as a non-starter."

ODO:

non-starter
NOUN

1.1 informal A person or plan that has no chance of succeeding or being effective.
‘as a business proposition it's a non-starter’

‘Had either of these companies withheld that support, Apple's plan could easily have become a non-starter.’

Something "that has not been thought through and fails to consider challenge or consequences" is premature:

[Oxford Dictionaries]

1 Occurring or done before the usual or proper time; too early.
‘the sun can cause premature ageing’
[with infinitive] ‘it would be premature to draw any firm conclusions at this stage’

‘We should oppose these attempts to force through a premature consensus.’
‘Occasionally, the author appears to overreach his material to draw premature conclusions.’
‘To discard potential new directions for research at this early stage would be premature.’

This has the sense of something being enacted too hastily, without supporting evidence, and without due consideration.

  • This is a nice suggestion. Although I'm looking for a single noun that communicates the concept – Dr. Beeblebrox Nov 8 at 20:07
  • @Dr.Beeblebrox Are you saying you want a noun that means premature proposal? I know that in your question you say you want "a formal noun that critically describes a proposal," but it's mainly only adjectives and adverbs that offer descriptions. I'll be very interested to see if anybody can provide such a noun for something so specific. An adjective seemed tricky enough. :) – Jason Bassford Nov 8 at 20:18
  • I agree that it's tough! :) While I agree that adjectives and adverbs describe, single-word nouns can can imply a description: e.g., a mistake is a misguided action – Dr. Beeblebrox Nov 8 at 20:30
  • @Dr.Beeblebrox I'm going to go out on a limb and make the statement that no such noun exists in this case . . . – Jason Bassford Nov 8 at 20:33

I wonder if intent (or intention, but the latter is less formal) might fit the bill here, as it does not require any planning or analysis of the situation.

For instance, a Letter of Intent is used before more detailed proposals are put forward (see for instance https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Letter_of_intent).

Considering the written proposal, an noun which can work here (typically with a qualifier) is: draft

"Without explaining why your objective is difficult to achieve, and exploring its potential unintended consequences, the proposal is unconvincing, and comes across as a (preliminary/first/initial/rough) draft."

ODO:

draft
NOUN
1 A preliminary version of a piece of writing.

‘Maybe later today I'll post my edited version of the draft.’

‘Since a job description for this office could not be found, I generated a preliminary draft of such a document.’

‘The study was still undergoing substantive editing in order to incorporate the suggestions of the lawyers and public policy analysts who reviewed its preliminary drafts.’

Shortsitedness

shortsightedly adverb
shortsightedness noun

1 : lacking foresight

// The plan was dangerously shortsighted.

"Shortsighted." Merriam-Webster.com. Merriam-Webster, n.d. Web. 8 Nov. 2018.

But I wouldn't just drop shortsitedness into your sample statement. I would use shortsighted attempt there.

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