In the following sentence:
The kid was laughing out loud, as those three frightened adults "screamed their way out of the door" and vanished.
-Can I use the above sentence "as is" to convey the meaning with or without the quotes?
To convey the following meaning: that the men, who just came into the room, were so very scared, so they screamed, and they shut the door with fear.
Would like to use it as is, but not sure if it sounds correct to be a poetic variation.