Words like insincere, over-earnest, do not do justice to the type of word I need. Example sentence: The president of the company read his well crafted speech but it fell flat because of his obvious “———“.

  • Did a thesaurus suggest anything? Disingenuous? What about gravitas? Pompous? Cn you give any more words that are nearby what you want? – Mitch Oct 19 at 18:42
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    Just a note: what fits into your "———" is a noun, not an adjective. You can rewrite as because he was obviously _____. – linguisticturn Oct 19 at 19:09
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    What's wrong with insincerity? (I ask because you use "insincere" in your question) – BruceWayne Oct 19 at 21:14
  • "Pompous" is a perfect fit for "fake gravitas". – Ben Oct 19 at 22:42

Pretentious is the first word that grabs me. (Please use the noun form, pretentiousness, to fill in the blank. )

attempting to impress by affecting greater importance, talent, culture, etc., than is actually possessed.

Synonyms include:

affected, ostentatious, showy; overambitious, pompous, artificial, inflated, overblown, high-sounding, flowery, grandiose, elaborate, extravagant, flamboyant, ornate, grandiloquent, magniloquent, sophomoric;

  • Pretentiousness? Pretentious, since it's an adjective, won't fit properly. – Tim Oct 20 at 11:09
  • Just the sense of the word. I saw that. Do you think it needs to be changed? The question wasn't really about parts of speech. – Karlomanio Oct 20 at 14:40
  • The OP left a gap, and none of your words can fit properly! – Tim Oct 20 at 15:37
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    This is, I think, the best answer, but the noun-form is pretension: see ngrams of pretensiousness and pretension. Pretension has lost a lot of popularity and may come off as archaic, but pretentiousness really never had the popularity in the first place. (Either is perfectly understandable, but at least to my ear pretension also sounds better.) – KRyan Oct 20 at 16:25

Will pomposity fit?

pompous
adj. 1. Characterized by excessive self-esteem or exaggerated dignity; pretentious: pompous officials who enjoy giving orders.
American Heritage Dictionary

pomposity
n, pl -ties
1. vain or ostentatious display of dignity or importance
Collins English Dictionary

pompous
1.Affectedly grand, solemn, or self-important.
Oxford Living Dictionary

pompous
1 : excessively elevated or ornate pompous rhetoric
2 : having or exhibiting self-importance : arrogant
"a pompous politician"
Merriam-Webster Dictionary

Not sure whether this word fits your intention of "gravitas", but it does mean possible affectation with the definitions containing descriptive words such as "pretentious" and "ostentatious".

The president of the company read his well crafted speech but it fell flat because of his obvious "pomposity".

  • I am thinking about the Canadian prime minister who tries so hard to sound like a statesman but is so absolutely, transparently putting on an act... – Derek Oct 19 at 18:49
  • @Derek So something like pomposity or ostentation that can easily be seen through? – Zebrafish Oct 19 at 18:51

Some possibilities:

affected
affected behavior is not natural but is done to impress other people
                                               His affected manner annoyed her.

bombastic
marked by or given to speech or writing that is given exaggerated importance by artificial or empty means : marked by or given to bombast (pretentious inflated speech or writing )
                                               the bombastic pronouncements of so many politicians

portentous
trying to seem very serious and important, in order to impress people

flatulent
pompously or portentously overblown

  • Portentious and affected are both coming very close to the mark. Thanks. Fakery of all kinds bothers me and I have been seeking descriptors for the offending parties... – Derek Oct 19 at 20:59
  • You noted the missing word needs to be a noun, but have answered with adjectives. 'Fell flat because of his obvious flatulence' sounds great though... – Tim Oct 20 at 11:12
  • @Tim Well, in the original post there is a mismatch between (1) what's in the title ('adjective') as well as the word examples provided ('insincere' and 'over-earnest', both adjectives), and (2) the lexical category of the missing word in the sample sentence. There are two ways to restore consistency. I went with the one where the word should be an adjective, and suggested, in my comment, how the sample sentence can be rewritten so that the missing word is an adjective. Agree about the flatulence, of course... – linguisticturn Oct 20 at 18:19

This would best fit as a description of the speech itself, but my (former) favorite word might meet your needs:

Grandiloquence

Noun: a lofty, extravagantly colorful, pompous, or bombastic style, manner, or quality especially in language

The president of the company read his well crafted speech but it fell flat because of his obvious delusions of grandeur.

to give sufficient levity to the negative ending is made more difficult by the inclusion of "well-crafted". So we must attacked the nature of the delivery. A "well-crafted" speech would never appear insincere, but a delivery with an air of fakeness would qualify for fake gravitas. "Without the standing to deliver such sentiment".

Many ways to drive home what you mean, but to use a single word makes it difficult.

  • Thanks - agree finding single-word is the challenge but comments here have given me some fine choices that will fit together nicely – Derek Oct 20 at 0:36

Perhaps not quite as near to the mark as some of the other suggestions, but nonetheless worth thinking about in this context is:

Priggish

For me (I'm 54 and Australian, with the age and region understanding of English thus implied that should be taken into account), this word's meaning also bears more than a whiff of the idea of insincerity, although, strictly speaking, priggishness can be unconscious, especially as a result of one's upbringing. However, the same can likely also be said of "pompous". Only "pretentious" unambiguously conveys to me the idea of conscious deceit by the speaker about their own supposedly superior level of knowledge or worthiness.

Nonetheless, most of the suggestions are often used in a somewhat satirical or ironic context, so then things like "pompous" become more unambiguous. In that case, a word / phrase that I sometimes hear, particularly from the pens (or computers) of the better sardonic political commentators is:

Lofty

Loftily Spoken

with similar meaning to exalted, but the metaphor in this word's origin of having one's head in the air ("loft") or above the clouds is probably what gives it its usually ironic flavor. However, again, satire has to be clear in the other words you use around it. An older person may use the word for "exalted" in a genuinely admiring way, to express belief in the "height" (significance) of someone or their ideas.

Here's another one I don't hear much but would definitely convey the idea to me:

Supercilious

since the Defendant in Gilbert and Sullivan's "Trial by Jury" is described as having a "Supercilous Smile" (actually a description given to himself, speaking of himself in the third person in the Defendant's solo "Oh, gentlemen, listen, I pray"). The word's origin "supercilium" meaning "eyebrow", referring to the arrogant facial expression of a raised eyebrow at whatever the Defendant thought beneath him, also gives the word a particularly visual irony for me.


A warning on Portentous. I actually had to look this one up, because I have quite a different understanding of this word. Perhaps this is a reason not to use it (because if I misunderstand it, then maybe another native English speaker may not either). I read this word literally, meaning "filled with portent". But I don't believe I have EVER seen this word written outside Shakespeare (who rather liked it, using in the sense I understand it) other than by someone like Emily Bronte and the only time I believe I have ever heard it spoken (or sung) was by Kate Bush in her song "Moving" from "The Kick Inside". As explained in the Wikipedia article, the song is a tribute to Bush's dance teacher Lindsay Kemp, and unambiguously expresses Bush's supreme admiration for Kemp and her belief that Kemp was indeed filled with portent. The words are "... if your beauty is portentous" and, naturally for Kate Bush, spelt and pronounced "-tus" in the Shakespearean way rather than "-shus" as in "portentious" in the other answers. I suspect that many other people of my generation were taught the word by Kate Bush, and would therefore read it very differently from how you would like it read.

May not be an adjective or fit your example sentence but, in case it helps, one may call someone who displays fake gravitas a "tryhard".

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