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I am updating my employer's bio due to the launch of a new product, but am unsure of whether or not the following sentence is grammatically correct: "Dr. Xxx has written and published over 30 books. Her internationally acclaimed flagship book, "xxx", has been translated into 6 languages and has sold over 150,000 copies."

My questions are as follows: 1) Rather than starting a second sentence, should I use a semicolon? 2) Is my placement of commas before/after the book's title correct? I chose to use quotation marks rather than italicize the title because not all platforms allow stylized text. 3) Should I remove the second "has" in the last sentence?

Other ideas on how to more accurately form these sentences are welcome.

Thanks in advance!

  • It looks good to me, but I'd let others confirm that. – Ambidextrous Sep 29 '18 at 21:30
  • So what is the question about "the first of which"? – Hot Licks Sep 30 '18 at 1:51
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It looks fine as is, unless this is American rather than British, in which case the comma after the title should go inside the quotation marks.

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