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We are creating a page that has a title, "Earn More Money" which states how the swimming coaches can earn a little bit of cash by following certain steps.

However, we find that this phrasing is a bit cheap and boring. Is there another way to phrase it that may or may not be related to swimming & less cheap

As per question: We'd one something casual, not too formal.

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  • Increase your income/salary/stipend ... I don't know. Do you want "chatty", "slang" or formal and professional-sounding? Do you want a tagline or just another way of saying "earn more money" e.g. "take home more brass"?
    – Mari-Lou A
    Commented Jun 12, 2018 at 8:28
  • You need to be more specific otherwise this question could be closed for being too broad.
    – Mari-Lou A
    Commented Jun 12, 2018 at 8:35
  • What are copywriters for?
    – Kris
    Commented Jun 12, 2018 at 12:22

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Diving into more money?

(Note that the word dive can be used to mean "to undertake with enthusiasm; to plunge or to go deeply into any subject, question, business, etc.; to explore.")

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