I'd like to include these two sentences below in my resume. However, I'm not sure if they're punctually correct. Would it be better to rephrase these?
• Partnered with leading retailers such as Nordstrom, IKEA, The Home Depot, CVS, Best Buy, and more to develop engaging copy and search engine optimized e-commerce material with strategic keyword positioning, improving traffic and sales.
• Achieved a 30% increase in sales by introducing a redesign of the magazine’s copy guidelines, graphic design, monthly newsletters, and cover illustration, which also resulted in increased advertising, subscriptions, and circulation figures.